第一节 (满分15分)
假定你是李华，暑假在澳大利亚悉尼歌剧院参观时结识了当地青年Jack，参观过程中他为你提供了很多帮助。在你即将回国之际，给他写一封信。内容包括：
1. 感谢他的帮助；
2. 你的收获与祝福。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：悉尼歌剧院Sydney Opera House
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
第一节 书面表达(满分15分)
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I am writing to deliver my heartfelt thanks to you for your timely help during my visit at the Sydney Opera House. I appreciate your guidance and the time you spent accompanying me.
I can still remember that I was at a loss what to do next. Then it was you who offered me valuable advice on how to explore it. With my invitation, you even gladly agreed to accompany me there. In the following hours, we had so much fun. Your point of view gave me a new perspective and I gained valuable insights, which made me have a better knowledge of the opera house.
Thank you again. If I may be of help to you, please let me know. Wish you all the best.
写作指导：
Step one审题
Para.1 根据首句提示可知尼古拉斯没有出现，父亲意识到发生了something wrong，然后要求接下去描述，按照合理的思维，接下去比较合理的描写内容是：
•父亲 反应 (feelings)—担心，害怕 (fear/fright)
行动(action) —求助(who)—根据chairlift(登山吊椅)，finish his run（滑雪或其他运动的道）ski trail (滑雪道)推测这是一个度假胜地,可以向搜寻队(rescue team)或the police求助
不建议续写的内容：
1. 自己找;开车回家找家人;村民帮助搜寻
2. 因天不好，救援滞后或知道儿子有自救技能，不着急，第二天再找(不合常理，生命至上)
•求助对象的反应(action)—安慰父亲（comfort）— 立即行动 （成立救援队）
•搜寻环境的描写（搜索未果；风雪交加；时间紧迫）
•搜寻结果（in vain），但是没有放弃搜寻【增加剧情的跌宕起伏】
不建议的续写内容：
直升飞机 与下文无衔接，与下文的雪地电动车衔接不畅
Step two
Para.2 当尼古拉斯听到the sound of a snowmobile，
(1) 他的feeling (excited);
(2) 他的action --- 冲出cave --- 相遇后的反应 --- 喜极而泣
引起注意（声音；物体；动作等） 紧紧拥抱
One possible version:
When Nicholas didn’t show up, his father realized there must be something wrong. A flush of fear came over him. He could do nothing but ask the police for help. The policemen comforted him and gathered a rescue team immediately to look for the missing teenager. They searched the mountain over the night, but in vain. With the clock ticking, the possibility of Nicholas’ survival would become small. Although the weather condition was poor and the wind was still fierce, they didn’t give up hope of finding him alive. The team split up and decided to expand their searching area.
The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile.（雪地电动车） Realizing that people had come to his rescue, Nicholas was very excited. He went out of the cave quickly and shouted with all his might（力气）. He even ran following the sound, and sure enough, he met face to face with the rescue team soon. At the sight of Nicholas, his father rushed forward and hugged him tightly, with tears in his eyes. All the people present felt relieved and happy at their reunion.
假定你是李华，暑假在澳大利亚悉尼歌剧院参观时结识了当地青年Jack，参观过程中他为你提供了很多帮助。在你即将回国之际，给他写一封信。内容包括：
1. 感谢他的帮助；
2. 你的收获与祝福。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：悉尼歌剧院Sydney Opera House
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
第一节 书面表达(满分15分)
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I am writing to deliver my heartfelt thanks to you for your timely help during my visit at the Sydney Opera House. I appreciate your guidance and the time you spent accompanying me.
I can still remember that I was at a loss what to do next. Then it was you who offered me valuable advice on how to explore it. With my invitation, you even gladly agreed to accompany me there. In the following hours, we had so much fun. Your point of view gave me a new perspective and I gained valuable insights, which made me have a better knowledge of the opera house.
Thank you again. If I may be of help to you, please let me know. Wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节 读后续写(满分25分)Li Hua
写作指导：
Step one审题
Para.1 根据首句提示可知尼古拉斯没有出现，父亲意识到发生了something wrong，然后要求接下去描述，按照合理的思维，接下去比较合理的描写内容是：
•父亲 反应 (feelings)—担心，害怕 (fear/fright)
行动(action) —求助(who)—根据chairlift(登山吊椅)，finish his run（滑雪或其他运动的道）ski trail (滑雪道)推测这是一个度假胜地,可以向搜寻队(rescue team)或the police求助
不建议续写的内容：
1. 自己找;开车回家找家人;村民帮助搜寻
2. 因天不好，救援滞后或知道儿子有自救技能，不着急，第二天再找(不合常理，生命至上)
•求助对象的反应(action)—安慰父亲（comfort）— 立即行动 （成立救援队）
•搜寻环境的描写（搜索未果；风雪交加；时间紧迫）
•搜寻结果（in vain），但是没有放弃搜寻【增加剧情的跌宕起伏】
不建议的续写内容：
直升飞机 与下文无衔接，与下文的雪地电动车衔接不畅
Step two
Para.2 当尼古拉斯听到the sound of a snowmobile，
(1) 他的feeling (excited);
(2) 他的action --- 冲出cave --- 相遇后的反应 --- 喜极而泣
引起注意（声音；物体；动作等） 紧紧拥抱
One possible version:
When Nicholas didn’t show up, his father realized there must be something wrong. A flush of fear came over him. He could do nothing but ask the police for help. The policemen comforted him and gathered a rescue team immediately to look for the missing teenager. They searched the mountain over the night, but in vain. With the clock ticking, the possibility of Nicholas’ survival would become small. Although the weather condition was poor and the wind was still fierce, they didn’t give up hope of finding him alive. The team split up and decided to expand their searching area.
The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile.（雪地电动车） Realizing that people had come to his rescue, Nicholas was very excited. He went out of the cave quickly and shouted with all his might（力气）. He even ran following the sound, and sure enough, he met face to face with the rescue team soon. At the sight of Nicholas, his father rushed forward and hugged him tightly, with tears in his eyes. All the people present felt relieved and happy at their reunion.
