Bobby was getting cold sitting out in his backyard in the snow. Bobby didn’t wear boots

5.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Bobby was getting cold sitting out in his backyard in the snow. Bobby didn’t wear boots; or rather, he didn't own any. The thin sneakers he wore had a few holes in them and they did a poor job of keeping out the cold.
Bobby had been in his backyard for about an hour already. Try as he might, he could not come up with an idea for his mother’s Christmas gift. He shook his head as he thought,“This is useless. Even if I do come up with an idea, I don't have any money for a gift.”
Wiping tears from his eyes, Bobby started walking down to the street where the shops were. It wasn’t easy being six without a father, particularly when he needed a man to talk to.
Bobby walked from shop to shop, looking into each decorated window. Everything seemed so beautiful but so out of reach. It was starting to get dark and Bobby reluctantly turned to walk home when suddenly his eyes caught the glimmer (微光) of the setting sun's rays reflecting on something on the roadside. He reached down and discovered a shiny dime (一角硬币) .
Never before has anyone felt as wealthy as Bobby did at that moment. As he held his newly-found treasure, warmth spread throughout his entire body and he walked into the first store. His excitement quickly turned cold when salesperson after salesperson told him that he could not buy anything with only a dime.
He saw a flower shop and went inside to wait in line. When the shop owner asked if he could help him, Bobby presented the dime and asked if he could buy one flower for his mother’s Christmas gift. The shop owner looked at Bobby and his one dime offering. Then he put his hand on Bobby's shoulder, saying, “You just wait here and I’ll see what I can do for you.,” As Bobby waited, he looked at the beautiful flowers and even though he was a boy, he could see why mothers and girls loved flowers.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语己为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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A few minutes later, the shop owner came out.
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Paragraph2:
With the bunch of roses in his hands, Bobby walked out of the door and then broke into a run.
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答案Paragraph1:
A few minutes later, the shop owner came out. He asked Bobby to come to the counter. There, before Bobby's eyes, lay twelve red roses, with leaves of green and tiny white flowers all tied together with a big silver tape. Bobby's heart sank as the owner placed them gently into a long white box. "That will be ten cents, young man." the shop owner said, reaching out his hand for the dime. Slowly, Bobby moved his hand to give the man his dime. Could this be true? He wondered.
Paragraph2:
With the bunch of roses in his hands, Bobby walked out of the door and then broke into a run. Within minutes, he was at home, still breathless. “Look, Mother, what have I got for you?” Bobby called out in the backyard. Mother came out from inside the house. She could hardly believe her eyes upon seeing the beautiful flowers in front of her. “Merry Christmas!” Bobby said and began to tell her everything he had experienced in the flower shop. Tearfully, Mother hugged her son in her arms. Standing in the bitter cold air, they somehow didn't feel cold at all.

【分析】
本文以事件为线索展开,讲述了在寒冷的圣诞节前,一个贫穷的孩子Bobby想为妈妈买一件圣诞礼物,但是他没有钱。他在街上偶然捡到了一个10美分的硬币。于是他尝试用这10美分硬币给妈妈买礼物。在一家花店,他拿出10美分硬币,跟店主说他想给妈妈买一朵花作为圣诞礼物。店主让他稍等一下。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“最后,店主出来了。”可知,第一段可描写店主给了Bobby一大束美丽的玫瑰花,但是只收了他10美分硬币。Bobby感到很疑惑,不敢相信是真的。
②由第二段首句内容“Bobby手里拿着一束玫瑰,走出门,然后跑了起来。”可知,第二段可描写Bobby回到家,将礼物给妈妈,并告诉了妈妈在花店的经历。店主的善举让他们在寒冷的冬天感到了温暖。
2.续写线索:店主给Bobby一大束花——Bobby感到疑惑——回家将礼物给妈妈——告诉妈妈在花店的经历——在寒冬,他们感到了温暖
3.词汇激活
行为类
①喘不过气起来:breathless / out of breath
②伸出:reach out/ extend
情绪类
①难以相信:can hardly believe / be unbelievable
②含泪地:tearfully / with tears in one’s eyes
【点睛】
[高分句型1] There, before Bobby’s eyes, lay twelve red roses, with leaves of green and tiny white flowers all tied together with a big silver tape.(句型There lie…;“with +宾语+过去分词作宾语补足语”结构)
[高分句型2] The shop owner said, reaching out his hand for the dime.(现在分词作伴随状语)
[高分句型3] Within minutes, he was at home, still breathless.(形容词作状语)
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