When tragedy struck his little girl the Depression, this father did the only thing he could.

6.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
When tragedy struck his little girl the Depression, this father did the only thing he could.
The tragedy happened in the year 1933. I was only 6 years old when I was rushed to the hospital with two crushed feet. My parents were told I might never walk again.
The accident happened when I was sitting in front of our house in Lowell, Massachusetts. I was playing in a puddle after a rainstorm and suddenly felt a huge weight on my feet. When I looked up, there was a carte on them. I cried out, but the motor was running and no one could hear me over the engine.
The driver had run across the street for a newspaper. When he got back to his car, he drove away, never knowing he had parked on my feet.
Just about then, our neighbor’s son came home and saw me bent over my feet in pain. He immediately carried me home, and I remembered thinking how tall and strong he was.
An ambulance came, and I remained in the hospital for 3 weeks while my feet were “repaired”. When I returned home, I could hardly walk.
I sat in our bay window and watched the children play on the street and longed to join them… but I couldn’t. I felt so left out despite my parents’ company.
My parents were told that if I was ever to walk again, I’d need treatment, which in those days meant riding a tricycle to strengthen the muscle and eventually get my feet back into condition for walking.
Our family couldn’t afford such an extravagance. Times were tough during the Depression, and there were five mouths to feed, besides buying coal and wood for the stove.
Dad couldn’t afford the bus fare and on cold winter days he walked 7 miles every day in his only winter coat to get to work. No, there was no money for tricycle. would be cripple all my life.
注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Then one day, while sitting at my usual place in the window, I saw my father walking up the street carrying a tricycle on his shoulder.
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It was many years later before I learned where and how Dad had got the tricycle.
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答案Paragraph 1:
Then one day, while sitting at my usual place in the window, I saw my father walking up the street carrying a tricycle on his shoulder. Was that true? I couldn't believe my eyes. I opened the window and cried out, “Is that tricycle for me?” Having put down the tricycle, Dad told me that it belonged to me. “Ride the tricycle every day, and then you will be all right, my girl!” From then on, with my father's company, I rode it every day to strengthen my muscle. Regardless of pain, I kept on practicing riding. Eventually I got my feet back into condition, and could walk normally!
Paragraph 2:
It was many years later before I learned where and how Dad had got the tricycle. My mother told me what happened on those cold winter days. In his only winter coat, he was wandering around the hospital. He begged the doctor to save my feet. Moved by my father, the doctor asked the hospital to give my father a part time job to do. With the doctor's help, my father got the job. Working day and night, eventually, he earned enough money to buy the tricycle.

【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者六岁时两只脚被压伤了,被紧急送往医院,作者父母被告知作者可能再也不能走路了,作者恢复需要买三轮车,而作者的家庭负担不起,这意味着作者这辈子都残废了。最终父亲争取到了一份兼职工作,为作者带回了三轮车,作者也康复了。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“后来有一天,我坐在我常坐的窗口位置上,看见父亲肩上扛着一辆三轮车从街上走来。”可知,第一段可描写父亲为作者带回三轮车,以及作者借助三轮车恢复的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“过了许多年我才知道爸爸的三轮车是怎么来的。”可知,第二段可描写作者得知父亲得到三轮车的经过。
2.续写线索:父亲带回三轮车——父亲陪作者骑三轮车——作者的脚恢复正常——作者得知真相
3.词汇激活
行为类
放下:put down/ drop off
加强:strengthen/ enhance
继续:keep on/ carry on
情绪类
真的:true / really
感动:moved/ touched
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Having put down the tricycle, Dad told me that it belonged to me. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] My mother told me what happened on those cold winter days. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
 
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