94.Write at least 60 words on the given situation(根据以下情况填写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)

(二十六)【2020 •上海市】
94.Write at least 60 words on the given situation(根据以下情况填写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
雕刻家Willard的成长经历告诉我们:人无完人,但每个人都有自己的独特之处,在Willard的主页上有一个留言区,每位浏览者都可以写下自己的故事和感想.
请以"Everyone can be special (天生我才)"为题,在留言区分享你的经历或见闻.
(注意: 1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分.
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分.)
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写作思路
该题属于话题写作。写作时要注意文章的要求分享经历或见闻。
参考范文
Everyone can be special
No one is perfect,but everyone is unique in their own way.
I saw a film yesterday.The main character of the film is an unusual boy.When he was born,he grew four times as fast as a normal person,which means that when he is 10,he looks 40.The other children always laughs at him,so he is very sad and feels lonely.One day,his mother said gently to him that no one was perfect,but everyone was unique in their own way.From then on,he and his classmates became good friends. 
Everyone can be special as long as you don't give up yourself.

【名师点评】
例文点评:例文采用三段式,第一大段人无完人,但是又是特别的;第二大段陈述自己的经历;第三大段呼吁大家不要放弃成为特别的人,结构清晰,段落分明。用第三人称来进行写作分析;时态采用一般过去时为主。
高分亮点:
短语:laugh at, as long as, be born, give up.
句型:when引导的时间状语从句,that引导的宾语从句,定语从句。
【点睛】
能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
 
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