（十九）【2020 •青海省】
61.人生的每一次经历都是一种学习和提升。2019年新型冠状病毒在中国和全球蔓延，我们见证了全国人民居家隔离，医务人员驰援武汉，学生停课不停学等战“疫”行动，这些都带给我们许多思考和启发。请以“A Life Lesson I Learned"为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：1.观点明确，内容完整，逻辑清晰，书写规范；
2.词数100左右。
A Life Lesson I Learned
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【写作思路】
本题属于话题作文。要求以“A Life Lesson I Learned”为题，结合新型冠状病毒肺炎在中国和全球的蔓延这一事件，写一篇短文谈谈自己的思考和启发。写作时要紧扣题目要求并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
A Life Lesson I Learned
All of us joined together to fight against the disease when COVID-19 hit the whole world in a sudden early this year.
It was a big challenge to everyone, but no one held back. Many people devoted themselves to fighting against it. The government advised us to stay at home and avoid going to the public places if possible. Doctors and nurses tried their best to treat the patients and take good care of them though they were at the risk of getting infected. People who were willing to help others worked as volunteers. They did a lot and were not afraid of the danger they faced.
The outbreak has caused so many deaths that it gives me a life lesson: We should cherish every moment with our loved ones.
【名师点评】
例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，开头点出大家一起参与抗疫，第二段讲述新冠肺炎给大家带来了挑战，各方一起与病毒作斗争，最后提到疫情爆发带来众多死亡，使自己懂得要珍惜与所爱的人在一起的每一刻。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
高分亮点：
短语：join together；fight against；in a sudden；devote oneself to doing sth.；advise sb. to do sth.；avoid doing sth.；try one's best to do sth.；take good care of；at the risk of；be willing to do sth.；be afraid of；give sb. a life lesson。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句；but连接的表转折关系的并列句；though引导的让步状语从句；who引导的定语从句；so ... that引导的结果状语从句。
61.人生的每一次经历都是一种学习和提升。2019年新型冠状病毒在中国和全球蔓延，我们见证了全国人民居家隔离，医务人员驰援武汉，学生停课不停学等战“疫”行动，这些都带给我们许多思考和启发。请以“A Life Lesson I Learned"为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：1.观点明确，内容完整，逻辑清晰，书写规范；
2.词数100左右。
A Life Lesson I Learned
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题属于话题作文。要求以“A Life Lesson I Learned”为题，结合新型冠状病毒肺炎在中国和全球的蔓延这一事件，写一篇短文谈谈自己的思考和启发。写作时要紧扣题目要求并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
A Life Lesson I Learned
All of us joined together to fight against the disease when COVID-19 hit the whole world in a sudden early this year.
It was a big challenge to everyone, but no one held back. Many people devoted themselves to fighting against it. The government advised us to stay at home and avoid going to the public places if possible. Doctors and nurses tried their best to treat the patients and take good care of them though they were at the risk of getting infected. People who were willing to help others worked as volunteers. They did a lot and were not afraid of the danger they faced.
The outbreak has caused so many deaths that it gives me a life lesson: We should cherish every moment with our loved ones.
【名师点评】
例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，开头点出大家一起参与抗疫，第二段讲述新冠肺炎给大家带来了挑战，各方一起与病毒作斗争，最后提到疫情爆发带来众多死亡，使自己懂得要珍惜与所爱的人在一起的每一刻。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
高分亮点：
短语：join together；fight against；in a sudden；devote oneself to doing sth.；advise sb. to do sth.；avoid doing sth.；try one's best to do sth.；take good care of；at the risk of；be willing to do sth.；be afraid of；give sb. a life lesson。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句；but连接的表转折关系的并列句；though引导的让步状语从句；who引导的定语从句；so ... that引导的结果状语从句。
