（四）【2020•浙江省湖州市】
53.假定你是李雷，请你对英国朋友Bruce的邮件进行同复。你可以根据邮件内容作适当发挥；邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；词数：80-100；短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
【写作思路】
这是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
【参考范文】
Hi, Bruce!
Thanks for your email. I'm looking forward to the exchange too!
You really don't have to worry a lot about the school rules here. But there are a few things you need to know.
We usually wear uniforms on school days, but you can wear what is suitable. And it'll be kind of cold when you are here so you'd better bring some warm clothes.
We are not allowed to use mobile phones at school. Besides, if we bring food to school, we must eat it outside during the break.
Hope this helps. Tell me if there's anything else you want to know.
Love,
Li Lei
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文采用五段式；时态以一般现在时为主；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点：
短语：look forward to；worry about；need to do sth；kind of；be allowed to do sth等。
句型：And it'll be kind of cold when you are here so you'd better bring some warm clothes.
Besides, if we bring food to school, we must eat it outside during the break.
53.假定你是李雷，请你对英国朋友Bruce的邮件进行同复。你可以根据邮件内容作适当发挥；邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；词数：80-100；短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
| To | LiLei@mail.com |
| Subject | Exchange Visit! |
| Hi there, Li Lei! I'm really excited about going to be at your school for the exchange visit later this year—hope you are too! But the thing is, I really don't want to do the wrong thing while I'm there and especially at the school, so I'm wondering if you could tell me a bit about the rules, about phones, clothes, food... Could you send me a quick email? I'd love to hear from you. Love, Bruce |
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| To | Bruce@mail.com |
| Subject | Re:Exchange Visit! |
| Hi, Bruce! Thanks for your email. I'm looking forward to the exchange too! Love, Li Lei |
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这是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
【参考范文】
Hi, Bruce!
Thanks for your email. I'm looking forward to the exchange too!
You really don't have to worry a lot about the school rules here. But there are a few things you need to know.
We usually wear uniforms on school days, but you can wear what is suitable. And it'll be kind of cold when you are here so you'd better bring some warm clothes.
We are not allowed to use mobile phones at school. Besides, if we bring food to school, we must eat it outside during the break.
Hope this helps. Tell me if there's anything else you want to know.
Love,
Li Lei
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文采用五段式；时态以一般现在时为主；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点：
短语：look forward to；worry about；need to do sth；kind of；be allowed to do sth等。
句型：And it'll be kind of cold when you are here so you'd better bring some warm clothes.
Besides, if we bring food to school, we must eat it outside during the break.
