（三）【2020•四川凉山州】
81.2020年，COVID-19在全球肆虐，生活因此变得有些艰难。请你根据所提供的信息，以Live in a Healthier Way为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈怎样以更健康的生活方式度过这段特殊时期。

 
要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺。
2. 短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。
3. 词数80左右。文章开头和结尾部分已给出，不计人总词数。
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In 2020, people around the world suffer from a kind of serious illness named COVID-19. We have to face more difficulties in our life because of it. ________________________________________________________________
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Thanks to the special period, we have learned that if we live in a healthier way, we can win.
【写作思路】
阅读题干可知是结合2020年，COVID-19在全球肆虐，生活因此变得有些艰难的情况。以Live in a Healthier Way为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈怎样以更健康的生活方式度过这段特殊时期。这是一篇建议类作文，写作内容应该包括日常生活方式和生活态度等等。
【参考范文】
Live in a Healthier Way
In 2020, people around the world suffer from a kind of serious illness named COVID-19. We have to face more difficulties in our life because of it.
As we all know, health is importance to us. Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life. So how should we spend this special period in a healthier lifestyle? Keep exercising and drink more water can make us healthier. In order to stay away from disease, we should wash our hands frequently, wear masks and do not get together. It is also important to have a good attitude towards life. No matter how difficult life is, we should face it with a smile. We can develop hobbies, share joys and sorrows with friends and family, and learn to care about others. The better you do, the happier your life will be.
Thanks to the special period, we have learned that if we live in a healthier way, we can win.
【名师点评】
例文点评：这是一篇优秀的例文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确的运用的时态，例文中运用的是一般现在时为主，人称是第一人称为主，主谓一致。例文采取三段式的写作手法，第一段是题干给出的，点明了目前的情况；第二段开始强调健康的重要性，引出话题保持健康的重要性及一些保持健康的方法，从生活方式和生活态度两方面出发；最后一段也是题干给出，表达了积极的态度。例文同时使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：As we all know众所周知；healthy lifestyle健康生活方式；keep doing sth一直做某事；In order to为了；get together一起；have a good attitude towards对……有良好的态度。
句型：（1）Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life. 只有当我们身体健康时，我们才能好好学习，享受生活。Only位于句首的倒装句。
（2）The better you do, the happier your life will be. 你做得越好，你的生活就会越幸福。The+比较级…，the+比较级… 越……,就越……。