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8.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
The watch was my grandfather's. He hung it by his bed. The face was marked with elegant Roman numbers and the case was gold. My grandfather got it after his fifty years of faithful service with his firm. I often gazed at it longingly as I sat with my grandfather after school.
The day I told him of my success in the examinations, he was pleased, "You'll be going to the new school next, Will. Remember you'll need plenty of patience. That's the right way. " I nodded when handing him the watch. He gazed at it for some moments, and wound it.
The next morning my mother told me he had died in his sleep and left me his watch. For safety, my mother was to put it away in trust until she considered me old enough to look after it. I protested(抗议)so strongly that she finally agreed to hang it in the kitchen where I could always see it.
The summer soon ended and it was time for me to enter the new school. I never made friends easily, and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys. One of them was a rich fellow whose way of impressing us was to parade his possessions before us. Everything Crawley had was better than ours—until he brought the watch.
"I have a better watch than that," I announced, attempting to impress them. "Well, show it to us," Crawley sneered(冷笑)in disbelief. Embarrassed, I promised to bring it to them that afternoon.
Considering there was no way to persuade my mother to let me take the watch, I decided to wait for her to step outside and slip the watch into my pocket. So I did. After lunch, as I was too excited to wait for the return bus, I got my bike out of the shed
I rode fast, excitement coursing through me. Then suddenly a puppy ran out into my path. I pulled at my brakes so hard that the bike stopped to a sharp standstill(急停)and I fell over.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1
I picked myself' up and put a trembling hand into my pocket.
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Paragraph 2
"That's not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience, " a voice echoed in my ears after the boys left.
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【答案】One possible version:
I picked myself up and put a trembling hand into my pocket. Then I brought out what was left of my grandfather's proudest possession. There was deep bulge in the watch, the glass shattered, and the Roman numbers looking crazily at one another. Putting it back, I rode slowly on to school, numb with misery. After what seemed forever, I finally turned up before the waiting boys. "My mother wouldn't let me bring it," I lied. "His mother wouldn't let him, "Crawley jeered. "What a story!" The others took up his cries and left without a backward glance.
"That's not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience, "a voice echoed in my ears after the boys left. Though anger, embarrassment and sadness hung heavily in the air, the voice drew me to the awareness of the mistakes I had made when I attempted to impress the boys. I shouldn't have tried to integrate in such a hasty way, nor should I have stolen the watch behind my mother. It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of the gift---patience. I knew for sure that every time I lost patience in the future I would remember my grandfather's words.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者的爷爷在去世之前送给了他一块手表。在他去了一所新学校之后,由于同学Crawley炫耀财富,他也想要将自己珍贵的手表展示给大家看。他悄悄地偷了表准备带到学校,谁知,在匆忙赶路的过程中,表摔碎了。突然他想起了爷爷对他说过的话,他意识到自己的行为错了,也明白了爷爷让他保持耐心的含义。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我站起来,颤抖着把手伸进口袋。”可知,第一段可描写作者的表被摔碎了,却骗同学们妈妈不允许他将表带到学校。
②由第二段首句内容“孩子们离开后,一个声音在我耳边回响:‘这不是正确的方法。耐心,威尔。耐心。’”可知,第二段可描写作者想起爷爷说的“耐心”,悟出了爷爷说的话的意思。
2.续写线索:摸手表——手表摔碎——欺骗同学——想起爷爷的话——理解“耐心”的含义
3.词汇激活(一个词汇要写出相近的表达)
行为类
①取出:bring out/take out/fish out
②出现:turn up/show up/appear
③企图:attempt/intend/aim at
情绪类
①沮丧、痛苦:numb with misery/frustrated and depressed
②尴尬:embarrassment/awkwardness
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. There was deep bulge in the watch, the glass shattered, and the Roman numbers looking crazily at one another. (含独立主格结构)
[高分句型2].Though anger, embarrassment and sadness hung heavily in the air, the voice drew me to the awareness of the mistakes I had made when I attempted to impress the boys. (让步状语从句,限制性定语从句和时间状语从句)
[高分句型3].I shouldn't have tried to integrate in such a hasty way, nor should I have stolen the watch behind my mother.(虚拟语气条件句中含有nor开头的倒装句)
 
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