9．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Carter enjoyed riding the school bus home. The ride home gave him some time to relax after a busy day of fifth grade. He usually sat alone and enjoyed that too. With four siblings（兄妹 ）he didn’t get much time alone. Sometimes he sat with his younger brother, Jackson, but Jackson was sick at home today.
The bus stopped and the tallest boy in his class, Dexter, stepped off followed by his younger brother, Billy. As the bus pulled away, Carter looked back over his shoulder to watch the boys. Dexter was yelling and waving his hands at his little brother. Billy said something Carter could not hear. Dexter yelled, gave his younger brother a hard shove and knocked him to the ground. Billy was on the ground wiping at his eyes, but Dexter walked away.
Carter turned in his seat, feeling disgusted. He hated seeing little kids get picked on (欺负). The sight of Billy on the ground crying was burned into his memory. He tried to think of something else.
He thought of the model car he was working on at home, a 1967 Corvette. He started building it over a week ago and just finished putting it together last night. Tonight, as soon as he finished his homework, he could start painting the car. That was his favorite part. He already had the perfect color of blue picked out.
He hurried off the bus, ran through his yard, and breezed through the kitchen with a quick hello to his mom. She was making spaghetti, which smelled delicious. He ran up the stairs two at a time and rushed into his room.
“Surprise!” his brother Jackson said, throwing his arms into the air. “What are you doing in my room? I thought you were sick!”
“I feel better!”
“What’s on your face? Are you bleeding?”
“No! I’m not bleeding.” Jackson wiped at his face. “It’s probably just paint. Look! Look what I did!” He pointed at the desk in the corner of Carter’ s room.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
Carter looked down at his desk in horror.
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Paragraph2:
Carter took a deep breath and then unfolded his fist.
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【答案】One possible version:
Carter looked down at his desk in horror. His Corvette! Jackson had painted it red. An awful dull shade of red! "Why would you do that?" Carter shouted. "I wanted to surprise you!" Jackson grinned, with his eyes gleaming. Carter could feel the anger growing, bubbling up inside him, his hands curling into fists. Jackson kept saying something, but so angry was Carter that he couldn't even hear a word. "Do you like it? I tried so hard. Look!" asked Jackson. Red paint was smeared across his face, forehead, even hair. Looking at Jackson, Carter couldn't help imagining his little brother spending the whole day carefully painting the car.
Carter took a deep breath and then unfolded his fist. Picturing the scene that Billy sit on the ground wiping at his eyes as his big brother Dexter walked away, Carter stepped toward the table where the car was still drying. Carter wasn't sure what to say. He didn't want to lie, but he didn't want to hurt his brother's feelings either. Jackson was only trying to surprise him. He could see that now. “Do you? Do you like it?" Jackson insisted. "Every time I look at this car, I'm going to think of you," Carter responded, a smile stretching across his face. And that was the truth. "Now, we'd better get that paint off your face before dinner."
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Carter坐校车回家，在路上看到同学Dexter把弟弟Billy推倒在地，扔下弟弟独自离开的场面，感到很厌恶。为了分散注意力，Carter想到回家后把自己制作的汽车模型漆成喜欢的蓝色，结果回家后发现弟弟在自己房间里，满脸红色油漆。原来弟弟把汽车模型漆成了红色，这让Carter非常生气，但想到弟弟花了一天时间为了给自己惊喜，想到Dexter对待弟弟的情景，Carter原谅了弟弟，并告诉弟弟每次看到汽车就会想到他。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Carter惊恐地低头看着自己的桌子。”可知，第一段可描写弟弟把汽车模型漆成了红色，Carter生气的言语和动作。
②由第二段首句内容“Carter深吸了一口气，然后摊开拳头。”可知，第二段可描写Carter由生气转为不生气的过程和想法。
2.续写线索：质问——生气——握拳——松拳——回想——原谅
3.词汇激活
行为类
①喊叫：shout /yell /cry out/ at the top of one's voice
②想象：picture /imagine/suppose
情绪类
①生气：anger/get angry/ take offence
②吃惊的：surprised /amazed/shocked
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Jackson grinned, with his eyes gleaming. （运用了with的复合结构）
[高分句型2] Picturing the scene that Billy sit on the ground wiping at his eyes as his big brother Dexter walked away, Carter stepped toward the table where the car was still drying.(运用了that引导的定语从句和where引导的定语从句)
Carter enjoyed riding the school bus home. The ride home gave him some time to relax after a busy day of fifth grade. He usually sat alone and enjoyed that too. With four siblings（兄妹 ）he didn’t get much time alone. Sometimes he sat with his younger brother, Jackson, but Jackson was sick at home today.
The bus stopped and the tallest boy in his class, Dexter, stepped off followed by his younger brother, Billy. As the bus pulled away, Carter looked back over his shoulder to watch the boys. Dexter was yelling and waving his hands at his little brother. Billy said something Carter could not hear. Dexter yelled, gave his younger brother a hard shove and knocked him to the ground. Billy was on the ground wiping at his eyes, but Dexter walked away.
Carter turned in his seat, feeling disgusted. He hated seeing little kids get picked on (欺负). The sight of Billy on the ground crying was burned into his memory. He tried to think of something else.
He thought of the model car he was working on at home, a 1967 Corvette. He started building it over a week ago and just finished putting it together last night. Tonight, as soon as he finished his homework, he could start painting the car. That was his favorite part. He already had the perfect color of blue picked out.
He hurried off the bus, ran through his yard, and breezed through the kitchen with a quick hello to his mom. She was making spaghetti, which smelled delicious. He ran up the stairs two at a time and rushed into his room.
“Surprise!” his brother Jackson said, throwing his arms into the air. “What are you doing in my room? I thought you were sick!”
“I feel better!”
“What’s on your face? Are you bleeding?”
“No! I’m not bleeding.” Jackson wiped at his face. “It’s probably just paint. Look! Look what I did!” He pointed at the desk in the corner of Carter’ s room.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
Carter looked down at his desk in horror.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph2:
Carter took a deep breath and then unfolded his fist.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Carter looked down at his desk in horror. His Corvette! Jackson had painted it red. An awful dull shade of red! "Why would you do that?" Carter shouted. "I wanted to surprise you!" Jackson grinned, with his eyes gleaming. Carter could feel the anger growing, bubbling up inside him, his hands curling into fists. Jackson kept saying something, but so angry was Carter that he couldn't even hear a word. "Do you like it? I tried so hard. Look!" asked Jackson. Red paint was smeared across his face, forehead, even hair. Looking at Jackson, Carter couldn't help imagining his little brother spending the whole day carefully painting the car.
Carter took a deep breath and then unfolded his fist. Picturing the scene that Billy sit on the ground wiping at his eyes as his big brother Dexter walked away, Carter stepped toward the table where the car was still drying. Carter wasn't sure what to say. He didn't want to lie, but he didn't want to hurt his brother's feelings either. Jackson was only trying to surprise him. He could see that now. “Do you? Do you like it?" Jackson insisted. "Every time I look at this car, I'm going to think of you," Carter responded, a smile stretching across his face. And that was the truth. "Now, we'd better get that paint off your face before dinner."
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Carter坐校车回家，在路上看到同学Dexter把弟弟Billy推倒在地，扔下弟弟独自离开的场面，感到很厌恶。为了分散注意力，Carter想到回家后把自己制作的汽车模型漆成喜欢的蓝色，结果回家后发现弟弟在自己房间里，满脸红色油漆。原来弟弟把汽车模型漆成了红色，这让Carter非常生气，但想到弟弟花了一天时间为了给自己惊喜，想到Dexter对待弟弟的情景，Carter原谅了弟弟，并告诉弟弟每次看到汽车就会想到他。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Carter惊恐地低头看着自己的桌子。”可知，第一段可描写弟弟把汽车模型漆成了红色，Carter生气的言语和动作。
②由第二段首句内容“Carter深吸了一口气，然后摊开拳头。”可知，第二段可描写Carter由生气转为不生气的过程和想法。
2.续写线索：质问——生气——握拳——松拳——回想——原谅
3.词汇激活
行为类
①喊叫：shout /yell /cry out/ at the top of one's voice
②想象：picture /imagine/suppose
情绪类
①生气：anger/get angry/ take offence
②吃惊的：surprised /amazed/shocked
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Jackson grinned, with his eyes gleaming. （运用了with的复合结构）
[高分句型2] Picturing the scene that Billy sit on the ground wiping at his eyes as his big brother Dexter walked away, Carter stepped toward the table where the car was still drying.(运用了that引导的定语从句和where引导的定语从句)
