On a weekend, a woman won a big bag of coins at a game machine. She took a break for dinner with

10.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a weekend, a woman won a big bag of coins at a game machine. She took a break for dinner with her husband in the hotel dining room. But first she wanted to put the coins in her room.
“I'll be right back and we'll go to eat," she told her husband. Then she carried the bag to the lift. As she was about to walk into the lift she noticed two men already aboard.
Both were huge, very huge figures. The woman was scared. Her first thought was: "These two are going to rob me.” Her next thought was: “Don't be afraid. They look like nice gentlemen.”
But fear seized her. She stood and stared at the two men. She felt anxious and ashamed. She hoped they didn't read her mind. Surely they knew her hesitation about joining them in the lift. It was all too obvious. Her face was red. She couldn't just stand there, so with an effort of will she picked up one foot and stepped forward and followed with the other foot and was on the lift. Avoiding eye contact, she turned around and faced the lift doors as they closed.
A second passed, and then another second, and then another. Her fear increased! The lift didn't move. Panic consumed her. “Oh dear," she thought, “I'm about to be robbed!”
Her heart sank and sweat poured. Then one of the men said, “Hit the floor.” Instinct (本能) told her: Do what they tell you. The bag of coins flew upwards as she threw out her arms and collapsed on the lift carpet. A shower of coins rained down on her. “Take my money and spare me," she prayed. More seconds passed.
She heard one of the men say politely, "Madam, if you'll just tell us what floor you're going to, we'll push the button. "The one who said it had a little trouble getting the words out .He couldn't help laughing.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
She lifted her head and looked up at the two men.
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Paragraph 2:
Then, the lift arrived at her floor.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
She lifted her head and looked up at the two men. They reached down to help her up. Confused, she struggled to her feet. "When I told my friend here to hit the floor," said the average-sized one, "I meant that he should hit the elevator button for our floor. I didn't mean for you to hit the floor, Ma'am." He spoke pleasantly. He bit his lip.
Paragraph 2:
Then, the lift arrived at her floor. They then insisted on walking her to her room. She seemed a little unsteady on her feet, and they were afraid she might not make it down the corridor. At her door they bid her a good evening. As she slipped into her room, she could hear them roaring with laughter as they walked back to the elevator. The woman brushed herself off. She pulled herself together and went downstairs for dinner with her husband.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了一位女士想把赢来的硬币放回房间,在坐电梯时遇到两个很高大的男人,她以为他们想抢劫,一直很忐忑,被两个男人看出来,最后一路护送女士回房间的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“她抬起头,抬头看着那两个男人。”可知,第一段可描写女士误会两个男士说的话。
②由第二段首句内容“然后,电梯到了她住的楼层。”可知,第二段可描写这位女士后来的反应。
2.续写线索:忐忑——误会——护送——振作
3.词汇激活
行为类
①摔倒:hit the floor/fall down/tumble
②打起精神:pull oneself together/cheer up/brace up
情绪类
①愉快地:pleasantly/joyfully
②害怕:be afraid that/be worried about/in worry
【点睛】
[高分句型1]:I meant that he should hit the elevator button for our floor.这句话运用了宾语从句。
[高分句型2]:As she slipped into her room , she could hear them roaring with laughter as they walked back to the elevator.这句话运用了as引导的状语从句。
 
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