“Mama,” I screamed, “why is Ink Spot sitting in Mrs. Cleary’s window?” I couldn’t believe my eyes.

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“Mama,” I screamed, “why is Ink Spot sitting in Mrs. Cleary’s window?” I couldn’t believe my eyes. I was about to step into my house when I saw Ink Spot combing himself in the window across the street. He was my cat, not Mrs. Cleary’s. She already had twelve cats; she couldn’t have all the cats in the neighborhood.
Ink Spot was my special cat. Santa Claus had left him in my Christmas stocking last year. How I loved him and held him in a close hug that winter morning. Mama and daddy smiled with pleasure as my eyes danced with joy.
I had always wanted a pet but the apartment we lived in didn’t allow anyone to have one. Then mama told daddy she was going to have another baby.
We moved out of the old apartment that March into a nice three-bedroom house on the other side of town. Da’Von arrived in September. The family was filled with joy, but I couldn’t see anything joyful in a crying red-faced baby who took up all mama’s time. About that same time, I was packed off to kindergarten. The school bus picked me up on the corner in the morning and dropped me off at the small spot in the afternoon. I put up with it just like I put up with everything else.
With everything going on at home, no one noticed me. That was until Aunt Calvina came for a visit. “That child needs just as much attention as the baby,” auntie complained when she noticed how I sat in the corner with my head bowed. Things changed after that. Mama paid more attention to me and daddy planned little trips for us over the weekends. It cheered me up a bit.
That Christmas was special for me because Ink Spot was in my stocking. The tiny black and white kitten was just the friend I needed to make me feel as though I were someone again. Every night, he curled up  beside me in bed and he was there for me after school when I raced home just to be with him.
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But today when I came home, Ink Spot was in Mrs. Cleary’s window.  
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After a week, I couldn’t stand the loneliness any longer.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】But today when I came home, Ink Spot was in Mrs. Cleary’s window. “Please go and tell Mrs. Cleary he is my cat, mama, ” I insisted. “If he wants to come home, he will.” mama stated as though my pet meant nothing to her. I stood on the sidewalk and stared at Ink Spot for a long time. “He’s my cat,” I said to myself. Every day when I came home from school, Ink Spot was sitting proudly in Mrs. Cleary’s window. “What right did she have to keep my pet?” I asked myself as I stood looking at him.
After a week, I couldn’t stand the loneliness any longer. I knocked at Mrs. Cleary’s door after school. When the door opened, I stated, “Ink Spot is my cat.”  I pointed to the window. Mrs. Cleary looked at me for a while. “Well, I thought he was just another street cat, so I took him in.” she responded. Then she went in and reappeared with exactly my Ink Spot. “Now you can take him home .” I held him tightly in my arms. “He is special, your parents must love you so much as to give you such a lovely little one,” added Mrs. Clean.
【分析】
本文以事物为线索展开,讲述了作者很孤独,只有小猫陪伴自己,后来丢失了自己心爱的猫咪墨点。结果发现它在邻居克利里太太那里,作者误会是邻居抢走了猫咪,后误会解除,猫咪重新回归的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“但今天我回家时,发现墨点在克利里太太的窗户上。”可知,第一段可描写作者误会克利里太太。
②由第二段首句内容“一周后,我再也不能忍受这种孤独了。”可知,第二段可描写作者和克利里太太解开误会,要回小猫。
2.续写线索:丢失墨点——发现墨点——产生误会——解开矛盾——猫咪回归
3.词汇激活
行为类
①毫无意义:mean nothing to/don’t make sense to sb
②收留:take sb in/put under one’s protection
情绪类
①骄傲地:do proudly/in proud
②忍受孤独:stand/endure the loneliness
【点睛】
[高分句型1]:Every day when I came home from school, Ink Spot was sitting proudly in Mrs. Cleary’s window.这句话运用了when引导的时间状语从句。
[高分句型2]:I asked myself as I stood looking at him. 这句话运用了现在分词作伴随状语。
 
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