7．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Disaster on a Mountain
When Ruth Hagan was seventy-eight years old, she visited her daughter Judy and teenage granddaughter Marcy in California. They headed for their cabin (小木屋), going forty miles up and down the mountains in their Bronco, winding terrifyingly close to cliffs.
After dinner Marcy announced the water tank was low and that she would take the Bronco down to the pump and get water. Ruth was nervous about her young granddaughter driving down the narrow dirt road by herself, but Judy reminded her that Marcy had been driving vehicles up there since she was twelve.
"Just be careful, Marcy," her mother warned. "The cliff side is pretty shaky. Be sure to hug the mountain side." Fifteen minutes later Judy was still watching when suddenly she screamed, "Oh no! She went over the cliff, Momma! The Bronco and Marcy - they went over! We have to help her! Come on!"
Judy took off running. Ruth ran behind her, but Judy was quickly out of sight after the first turn in the road. Ruth raced down the steep hill, breathing hard. She ran on and on, down the hill, up the next, trying to catch up with her daughter. It was getting harder and harder to see anything at dusk.
Ruth stopped cold and looked around. She screamed into the darkness "Judy, where are you?" Off to her immediate right and down the cliff she heard, "Down here, Mother! Don't come near the edge! I slipped on loose rocks and fell over. I'm down about twenty feet."
"Oh dear God, Judy, what can I do?"
"Just stay back, Momma! I think I can crawl back up. I saw the white roof of the Bronco when I was falling, Momma, and I heard Marcy calling for help. She's alive! But she's way down there in the valley. You have to go back to the cabin and phone for help. Tell them to send a helicopter. We have to get Marcy out!"
Ruth turned around and started running back up the hill she'd just ran awkwardly down. Up one hill, down the next. She had one hill left to climb when she fell on her face. Chest pains took her breath away. She started to sob.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
At that moment something went through Ruth.
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Paragraph 2:
She sputtered out (语无伦次地说) the details of the disaster, pointing out directions to where Marcy and Judy were.
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【答案】At that moment something went through Ruth. It was like a powerful energy and she knew for certain that she was the only person that could help Judy and Marcy out! She was the hope to them. Never before in her life had she been overwhelmed with such determination and perseverance. Despite her unbearable pain, she stood up. Ruth ran on confidently, faster than she had before, and up that last big hill. She turned into the cabin driveway, pushed through the front door and dialed 911.
She sputtered out (语无伦次地说) the details of the disaster, pointing out directions to where Marcy and Judy were. As soon as she hung up, she started down the mountain again to meet and guide the rescuers. An hour later, the fire trucks, ambulance and, finally, the Flight for Life helicopter arrived. Judy was rescued, but it took three-and-a-half hours to cut Marcy free from the wreckage at the bottom of the cliff. At last she was pulled out of the back end of the Bronco and carried to the waiting ambulance. She was rushed to the hospital for treatment. Ruth Hagan knew the mountain didn't beat them.
【分析】
文章以时间为线索，讲述了露丝·黑根去拜访住在山上的朱迪和马尔西。当发现车的水箱水不够的时候，马尔西决定去水泵处取水，结果却翻下悬崖，而朱迪也为了救马尔西滑下了悬崖。生死关头，露丝竭尽全力帮助她们脱险
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在那一刻，露丝一些东西闪过露丝·黑根的脑海”可知，第一段可描写露丝·黑根想到了什么？什么能够促使露丝积聚更多的力量继续下去? 露丝能够做什么？
②由第二段首句内容“她语无伦次地描述事故的细节，并指着朱迪和马尔西消失的方向。”可知，第二段可描写救援的到来和救援的过程，并表达出原文的主题：出于对亲人的爱让一个年纪偏大的人产生惊人的力量。
2.续写线索：
思考——打电话——描述意外细节——迎接救援人员——救援成功——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①打电话：give a call/ phone sb./call up/ring up
②描述细节：give a clear description/describe the deatails
③迎接救援人员：meet the rescuers/welcome the savers
④救援成功：make it/ succeed in doing sth.
情绪类
积极：positive attitude/act positively
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Never before in her life had she been overwhelmed with such determination and perseverance.（使用了倒装句的结构）
[高分句型2]As soon as she hung up, she started down the mountain again to meet and guide the rescuers.（使用了as soon as引导的时间状语从句）
Disaster on a Mountain
When Ruth Hagan was seventy-eight years old, she visited her daughter Judy and teenage granddaughter Marcy in California. They headed for their cabin (小木屋), going forty miles up and down the mountains in their Bronco, winding terrifyingly close to cliffs.
After dinner Marcy announced the water tank was low and that she would take the Bronco down to the pump and get water. Ruth was nervous about her young granddaughter driving down the narrow dirt road by herself, but Judy reminded her that Marcy had been driving vehicles up there since she was twelve.
"Just be careful, Marcy," her mother warned. "The cliff side is pretty shaky. Be sure to hug the mountain side." Fifteen minutes later Judy was still watching when suddenly she screamed, "Oh no! She went over the cliff, Momma! The Bronco and Marcy - they went over! We have to help her! Come on!"
Judy took off running. Ruth ran behind her, but Judy was quickly out of sight after the first turn in the road. Ruth raced down the steep hill, breathing hard. She ran on and on, down the hill, up the next, trying to catch up with her daughter. It was getting harder and harder to see anything at dusk.
Ruth stopped cold and looked around. She screamed into the darkness "Judy, where are you?" Off to her immediate right and down the cliff she heard, "Down here, Mother! Don't come near the edge! I slipped on loose rocks and fell over. I'm down about twenty feet."
"Oh dear God, Judy, what can I do?"
"Just stay back, Momma! I think I can crawl back up. I saw the white roof of the Bronco when I was falling, Momma, and I heard Marcy calling for help. She's alive! But she's way down there in the valley. You have to go back to the cabin and phone for help. Tell them to send a helicopter. We have to get Marcy out!"
Ruth turned around and started running back up the hill she'd just ran awkwardly down. Up one hill, down the next. She had one hill left to climb when she fell on her face. Chest pains took her breath away. She started to sob.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
At that moment something went through Ruth.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
She sputtered out (语无伦次地说) the details of the disaster, pointing out directions to where Marcy and Judy were.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】At that moment something went through Ruth. It was like a powerful energy and she knew for certain that she was the only person that could help Judy and Marcy out! She was the hope to them. Never before in her life had she been overwhelmed with such determination and perseverance. Despite her unbearable pain, she stood up. Ruth ran on confidently, faster than she had before, and up that last big hill. She turned into the cabin driveway, pushed through the front door and dialed 911.
She sputtered out (语无伦次地说) the details of the disaster, pointing out directions to where Marcy and Judy were. As soon as she hung up, she started down the mountain again to meet and guide the rescuers. An hour later, the fire trucks, ambulance and, finally, the Flight for Life helicopter arrived. Judy was rescued, but it took three-and-a-half hours to cut Marcy free from the wreckage at the bottom of the cliff. At last she was pulled out of the back end of the Bronco and carried to the waiting ambulance. She was rushed to the hospital for treatment. Ruth Hagan knew the mountain didn't beat them.
【分析】
文章以时间为线索，讲述了露丝·黑根去拜访住在山上的朱迪和马尔西。当发现车的水箱水不够的时候，马尔西决定去水泵处取水，结果却翻下悬崖，而朱迪也为了救马尔西滑下了悬崖。生死关头，露丝竭尽全力帮助她们脱险
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在那一刻，露丝一些东西闪过露丝·黑根的脑海”可知，第一段可描写露丝·黑根想到了什么？什么能够促使露丝积聚更多的力量继续下去? 露丝能够做什么？
②由第二段首句内容“她语无伦次地描述事故的细节，并指着朱迪和马尔西消失的方向。”可知，第二段可描写救援的到来和救援的过程，并表达出原文的主题：出于对亲人的爱让一个年纪偏大的人产生惊人的力量。
2.续写线索：
思考——打电话——描述意外细节——迎接救援人员——救援成功——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①打电话：give a call/ phone sb./call up/ring up
②描述细节：give a clear description/describe the deatails
③迎接救援人员：meet the rescuers/welcome the savers
④救援成功：make it/ succeed in doing sth.
情绪类
积极：positive attitude/act positively
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Never before in her life had she been overwhelmed with such determination and perseverance.（使用了倒装句的结构）
[高分句型2]As soon as she hung up, she started down the mountain again to meet and guide the rescuers.（使用了as soon as引导的时间状语从句）
