5．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I like all kinds of chocolate. Best of all, though, I like bitter baking chocolate. My mother had bought a bar of it, and somehow I couldn’t stop thinking about it.
I was helping my father on the farm. It was right then I got the idea. I could cut a chunk(大块) of chocolate. My mother would be sure to miss it, but before she had any idea who had done it, I could admit I’d taken it. Probably I would not even get a spanking(打屁股) from my dad who was always severe on me and taught me to be a man of good character.
I waited until my mother was out feeding the chickens. Then I told my father I thought I’d go in for a drink of water. I got the bar down but I heard my mother coming just when I had the knife ready to cut it. So I slipped the chocolate into my shirt and left quickly. Before I went back to help my father, I went to the barn(谷仓) and hid the chocolate there.
On the way out for the cows, I calmed down a little and could think better. I told myself that I hadn’t really stolen the whole bar of chocolate, because I meant to take only a little piece. If I put back the whole bar, I wouldn’t have done anything wrong at all.
I nearly decided to put it all back. But just thinking about that chocolate made my tongue almost taste the smooth bitterness of it. I got thinking that if I sliced(切) about half an inch off the end with a sharp knife, my mother might never notice it.
Suddenly, I remembered what my father had said once ---- some of the family money was mine because I had helped to earn it. Why wouldn’t it be all right to figure the bar of chocolate had been bought with my own money? That seemed to fix everything.
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150词左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语、
Paragraph 1:
That night I couldn’t sleep.
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By moonlight, just as I was about to cut it, my father said, “Son!”
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【答案】One possible version:
Paragraph 1:
That night I couldn’t sleep. The thought of tasting the smooth bitterness of the chocolate made me wide awake, tossing and turning in bed. Finally I got up and slipped out into the yard secretly with a knife in my pocket. Then I trotted into the barn and couldn't wait to take out the chocolate immediately, brimming with sheer excitement mingled with nervousness. By the light of the moon, I cautiously opened the packing paper, the tempting smell entirely indulging myself in it without noticing my father entering behind.
Paragraph 2:
By moonlight, just as I was about to cut it, my father said, “Son!” Dismay and scare beating me out of breath, I grabbed up the bar of chocolate and hid it in my pocket before I turned around. I stood there motionlessly, head down in shame, wondering a spanking was probably inevitable. Great to my surprise, my father came up to me, tapped my shoulder and said “You could have had it if you’d asked for it, but I won’t have you being sneaky about things.” A strong sense of guilt taking hold of me, I looked up in his eyes and nodded with agreement.
【分析】
本文讲述了作者喜欢吃巧克力，一天妈妈买了一块巧克力，作者想偷偷切下一小块儿吃，当他正要动手时，恰巧妈妈走了进来，为了避免被发现，他把整块巧克力藏到了谷仓里。作者原本只是想切下一小块，现在拿了整块，所以现在作者有负罪感。想着把巧克力还回去，但是又抵不住巧克力里的诱惑。然后他想到爸爸曾说过，自己也帮家里挣钱了，所以他想这巧克力是自己的钱买的，心里也就释然了。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“那天晚上，我无法入睡。”可知，这一段可描写心里一直想着巧克力的作者无法入睡，最终还是起来，来到谷仓拿出了巧克力。
②由第二段首句内容“月光下，我正要切开巧克力时，我的爸爸喊了我一声。”可知，这一段可描写爸爸发现了我之后，我的反应以及爸爸对我的教育。
2.续写线索：我辗转反侧——到谷仓打开巧克力——爸爸出现——我很羞愧——爸爸对我的教育
3.词汇激活行为类
①. 辗转反侧：toss and turn/twist and turn
②. 进入：slip into/trot into/run into/walk into/enter
情绪类
①. 羞愧：be ashamed of/in shame/be sorry for/about sth/to one's shame
②. 紧张：feel nervous/tense/be strained
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. The thought of tasting the smooth bitterness of the chocolate made me wide awake, tossing and turning in bed. (现在分词tossing and turning作状语)
[高分句型2]. Dismay and scare beating me out of breath, I grabbed up the bar of chocolate and hid it in my pocket before I turned around. (逗号前是独立主格结构作状语；由before引导时间状语从句)
I like all kinds of chocolate. Best of all, though, I like bitter baking chocolate. My mother had bought a bar of it, and somehow I couldn’t stop thinking about it.
I was helping my father on the farm. It was right then I got the idea. I could cut a chunk(大块) of chocolate. My mother would be sure to miss it, but before she had any idea who had done it, I could admit I’d taken it. Probably I would not even get a spanking(打屁股) from my dad who was always severe on me and taught me to be a man of good character.
I waited until my mother was out feeding the chickens. Then I told my father I thought I’d go in for a drink of water. I got the bar down but I heard my mother coming just when I had the knife ready to cut it. So I slipped the chocolate into my shirt and left quickly. Before I went back to help my father, I went to the barn(谷仓) and hid the chocolate there.
On the way out for the cows, I calmed down a little and could think better. I told myself that I hadn’t really stolen the whole bar of chocolate, because I meant to take only a little piece. If I put back the whole bar, I wouldn’t have done anything wrong at all.
I nearly decided to put it all back. But just thinking about that chocolate made my tongue almost taste the smooth bitterness of it. I got thinking that if I sliced(切) about half an inch off the end with a sharp knife, my mother might never notice it.
Suddenly, I remembered what my father had said once ---- some of the family money was mine because I had helped to earn it. Why wouldn’t it be all right to figure the bar of chocolate had been bought with my own money? That seemed to fix everything.
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150词左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语、
Paragraph 1:
That night I couldn’t sleep.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:
By moonlight, just as I was about to cut it, my father said, “Son!”
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Paragraph 1:
That night I couldn’t sleep. The thought of tasting the smooth bitterness of the chocolate made me wide awake, tossing and turning in bed. Finally I got up and slipped out into the yard secretly with a knife in my pocket. Then I trotted into the barn and couldn't wait to take out the chocolate immediately, brimming with sheer excitement mingled with nervousness. By the light of the moon, I cautiously opened the packing paper, the tempting smell entirely indulging myself in it without noticing my father entering behind.
Paragraph 2:
By moonlight, just as I was about to cut it, my father said, “Son!” Dismay and scare beating me out of breath, I grabbed up the bar of chocolate and hid it in my pocket before I turned around. I stood there motionlessly, head down in shame, wondering a spanking was probably inevitable. Great to my surprise, my father came up to me, tapped my shoulder and said “You could have had it if you’d asked for it, but I won’t have you being sneaky about things.” A strong sense of guilt taking hold of me, I looked up in his eyes and nodded with agreement.
【分析】
本文讲述了作者喜欢吃巧克力，一天妈妈买了一块巧克力，作者想偷偷切下一小块儿吃，当他正要动手时，恰巧妈妈走了进来，为了避免被发现，他把整块巧克力藏到了谷仓里。作者原本只是想切下一小块，现在拿了整块，所以现在作者有负罪感。想着把巧克力还回去，但是又抵不住巧克力里的诱惑。然后他想到爸爸曾说过，自己也帮家里挣钱了，所以他想这巧克力是自己的钱买的，心里也就释然了。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“那天晚上，我无法入睡。”可知，这一段可描写心里一直想着巧克力的作者无法入睡，最终还是起来，来到谷仓拿出了巧克力。
②由第二段首句内容“月光下，我正要切开巧克力时，我的爸爸喊了我一声。”可知，这一段可描写爸爸发现了我之后，我的反应以及爸爸对我的教育。
2.续写线索：我辗转反侧——到谷仓打开巧克力——爸爸出现——我很羞愧——爸爸对我的教育
3.词汇激活行为类
①. 辗转反侧：toss and turn/twist and turn
②. 进入：slip into/trot into/run into/walk into/enter
情绪类
①. 羞愧：be ashamed of/in shame/be sorry for/about sth/to one's shame
②. 紧张：feel nervous/tense/be strained
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. The thought of tasting the smooth bitterness of the chocolate made me wide awake, tossing and turning in bed. (现在分词tossing and turning作状语)
[高分句型2]. Dismay and scare beating me out of breath, I grabbed up the bar of chocolate and hid it in my pocket before I turned around. (逗号前是独立主格结构作状语；由before引导时间状语从句)
