（十三）【2020 •黔南州】
X. 书面表达。
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一场新冠病毒疫情在全世界蔓延，对各行各业影响很大，使人们对未来的工作选择有了新的认识和思考。请你以"What is my dream job?"为题，用英语写一篇短文，发表在学校英语手抄报上，谈谈你对未来职业选择的想法。
内容：
1. 疫情前的职业梦想和原因（2点）；
2. 疫情后的梦想职业和原因（2点）；
3. 现阶段应该怎么做（2点）。
要求：
1. 结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
2. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名、学校名等信息；
3. 词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：scientist, engineer, policeman/policewoman, teacher, doctor
What is my dream job?
I have many
dreams.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I will be a good
student.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这篇短文要求以What is my dream job?为题，介绍一下自己理想的工作。审题可知，文章中应包括以下内容：首先介绍疫情之前自己理想的工作以及原因；然后介绍发生疫情之后，自己理想的工作发生了变化以及原因；最后简述一下现阶段应该怎样做来实现自己的理想。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主叙述，人称是第一人称或第三人称。
【参考范文】
What is my dream job?
I have many dreams. I wanted to be a scientist because scientists can invent many high-tech products to make our life more convenient. I also wanted to be a teacher because I like to get along with children and it is a respectable job. But at the beginning of 2020, COVID-19 broke out suddenly and my dream has changed since then. Now I want to be a doctor because I want to help people in need. When our country and people are in trouble, doctors and nurses devote themselves to saving people’s lives. They are heroes.
I will be a good student in order to make my dream come true. I will study hard from now on and go to a medical college. I hope I can realize my dream one day.
【名师点评】
例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，结构清晰。文章采用了两段式结构，第一段介绍了疫情前后自己的理想工作以及原因；第二段介绍了现阶段自己如何努力实现自己的理想。短文叙述清晰、条理，理由充分、合理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中用到了简单句、状语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词等句式或结构，表达流畅，意思连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：get along with；at the beginning of；since then；in need；in trouble；come true；from now on。
句型：because引导原因状语从句；when引导时间状语从句；动词不定式作宾语、目的状语；hope后跟宾语从句；动名词作宾语。