安全对于每个人来说都很重要。作为中学生, 我们可能遇到哪些安全问题?该怎样处理呢?校团委决定组织一次安全教育主题班会

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安全对于每个人来说都很重要。作为中学生, 我们可能遇到哪些安全问题?该怎样处理呢?校团委决定组织一次安全教育主题班会, 请根据以下要点提示, 以How to Keep Safe为题写一篇英文发言稿。
中学生安全问题及对策 一、交通安全:遵守交通规则。
二、食品安全:注意饮食安全。
三、活动安全:上下楼梯靠右行;体育锻炼要小心:不允许私自下河游泳。
四、交友安全:注意网络交友安全。
遇险建议 遇到危险要保持冷静, 保证自身安全, 然后及时报警或向家长、老师求助。
 
写作要求:
1. 结构完整, 要点齐全, 可适当发挥;
2. 表达通顺, 语言规范, 书写清晰;
3. 文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息;
4. 词数80左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
How to Keep Safe
Hello, everyone. Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.
写作思路
本文是一篇话题作文。以“如何保持安全”为题展开描述,文中阐述中学生的安全问题及对策,以及遇险的建议。
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How to Keep Safe
Hello, everyone. Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe.
Firstly, we must follow the traffic rules. Secondly, we should pay attention to the food safety. Be sure not to eat too much junk food. Thirdly, when we go upstairs or downstairs, we should keep to the right. Be careful while doing sports. Remember not to swim in the river alone. What's more, we'd better not make friends online. We must stay away from dangerous people around.
If we get into trouble, we must keep calm and safe first and then call the police, the teachers or parents for help.
In a word, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.

【名师点评】
1.例文点评:本文采用的是第一人称,时态采用的一般现在时。准确运用事态,并保持主谓一致。句子通顺,逻辑性强。
2.高分亮点:
短语:pay attention to注意;too much太多;what’s more而且;had better(not) do sth最好(不)做某事;in a word总之。
句子:Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe用的是倒装句;Be sure not to eat too much junk food用的是祈使句;when we go upstairs or downstairs, we should keep to the right中when引导的是时间状语从句。
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